Eternal love

Eyes await his soothing presence

Tears greet him at heart’s door

Emotion unprecedented, ethereal

Regenerates the colourless core

Nourishing with its radiance

Allaying fear, shrivelling doubts

Liberating ancient inhibitions

Love enlivens, rekindling hope

Opening vistas of new possibilities

Victory song of the resolute bond

Everlasting promise for life and beyond. 

.

Photo credit : Fadi-xd (unsplash.com)

Leave your vote

14 Points
Upvote Downvote
More

Comments

26 responses to “Eternal love”

  1. Such intense feelings! So so beautiful poem!πŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thanks so much, dear Pooja for the warm appreciation. Means a lot. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  2. Beautifully written Moonmoon!

    1. Thanks so much, dear Nitika . πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thank you, dear Gowri. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  3. Beautiful acrostic!

    1. The essence of timeless love you’ve beautifully captured it in the verse….everlasting promises for life and beyond πŸ’š

      1. Thanks so much for your beautiful comment, dear Roodaba. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    2. Thank you so much, dear Sai. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thanks you, dear SheetalπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  4. This is a beautiful acrostic, dear Moonmoon. Strong feelings put across aptly.πŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thanks so much, dear Natasha. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š so glad you liked it.

  5. Hope is a thing that sustains,
    Beautifully put

    1. So well put, ma’am. Thank you so much, ma’am. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    2. Beautiful.. Intense feelings expressed well…

      1. Thank you so much for the warm appreciation, dear Kirti. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thank you so much, dear Fatema. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  6. @Moonmoon πŸ’—Amazing feat, how well depicted.

    1. Thanks so much for the encouragement, dear Mumtaz. Means a lot. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  7. Wow! You have written about something that we all pine to have in our life…eternal love.Beautiful poem Moonmoon.

    1. Yes, so true, Indrani. Thank you so much, dear.πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  8. Amazing my dearπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š
    Loved it

    1. Thank you so much for the warm appreciation, dear Sonali. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š so glad you liked it.

Leave a Reply

Log In

Forgot password?

Don't have an account? Register

Forgot password?

Enter your account data and we will send you a link to reset your password.

Your password reset link appears to be invalid or expired.

Log in

Privacy Policy

Add to Collection

No Collections

Here you'll find all collections you've created before.