Dune Tunes

A sea of gold,

Spread over a stretch,

Far beyond the eyes reach

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Slender and tall palm trees,

With green crown and dates,

Is waiting for it’s date.

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A lonely cactus is yearning

For a companion,

In a land, that’s barren.

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Far away in the horizon,

The camels walk in stride,

With their humps held up in pride.

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A weary bunch of travelers,

In search of an oasis,

Were tricked by the mirages.

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The cerise, evening sky,

And the gentle, cool breeze,  

Made the dunes feel at ease.

Image courtesy: https://unsplash.com/photos/N3hafr52Teg

Kirti V

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22 responses to “Dune Tunes”

  1. Beautiful word-painting, Kirti. Loved it. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thank you dear πŸ’šπŸ’š

  2. Beautiful poem Kirti πŸ™‚

    1. Thank you dear NitikaπŸ’šπŸ’š

  3. very picturesque poem.. well penned

    1. Thank you dearπŸ’šπŸ’š

  4. Beautifully penned imagery

    1. Thank you ma’am πŸ’šπŸ’š

  5. Your imagery is marvellous .

    1. Thank you dear πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thank you GowriπŸ’š

    1. Thank you Sarita ma’am πŸ’šπŸ’š

  6. Beautiful imagery, KirtiπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thank you dearπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  7. Wow. Wonderful visual imagery Kirti!

  8. Word painting, your imagery is beautiful.

    1. Thank you πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  9. Awesome and picturesque πŸ’š

    1. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

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