Dreams!

Frozen dreams dangle on yore’s tree of love

Shimmering icicles reflect the tarnished colours of giggles, chuckles

Rainbow moments lay buried beneath a milky carpet.

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Bare, undraped browns shiver but grasp, to the warm Earth 

Frosty souls wait for the spring to return.

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And one day, the Spring sun shines melting the frigid hearts, sprouting pink blossoms!  💚

Pic courtesy: pixabay

*The poetry form is called Cherita. It is written in three stanzas, first one line, then two lines followed by three lines. But it can also be written in the in verses form as I did here. Started with there lines, followed by two and ending in one line. *

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24 responses to “Dreams!”

  1. Ah so dreamy 🙂
    beautiful

  2. Loved it! Beautiful expressions!💚💚

  3. Beautiful! And I learnt a new poetic form.

  4. Another poetic form…nicely expressed Sonali

  5. Beauty described from winter to spring.

  6. Sonali beautiful poem

  7. Beautiful poem of hope with wonderful imagery. 💚💚💚Love the poetry form, shall try soon. Thank you for explaining.

    1. Thank you Moonmoon💚

  8. Beaitiful, scenic!!

  9. This is a beautiful Cherita, mon cherie!

  10. Nicely penned in a new poetic form

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