Dawn

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Dawn

Dawn swathed

In silken robes of hope

Treads softly past

My half open window,

Breathing a prayer

Over me.

I stir and sigh,

As the dreams of the night gone by

Toss around, teasing gently.

A rubicund ray

Steals through the open spaces

Of twilight

And gently caresses my little world.

Another day I take –

A few hours from a lifetime –

To etch a line or two.

A story, am I, in the making –

Half told, half heard.

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12 responses to “Dawn”

  1. Mesmerising poem.
    Somehow, the last sentence made me sigh! Somehow, It made me feel that the protagonist perhaps needs the Dawn to linger on for a while. Or, may be, my interpretation is incorrect. πŸ˜€πŸ’šπŸ’š

  2. Loved the wat you have analysed and appreciated the poems dear friends πŸ’š

  3. Wowwww! Beautiful ❀️ the closing lines πŸ’

    1. Beautiful lines ma’am πŸ’šπŸ’š

  4. Amazing… a story am I in the making… wowoπŸ’š

  5. Beginning of another day. Wow.

  6. So so beautiful poem! ImageryπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

  7. So beautifully put πŸ’š

  8. Thanks so much πŸ’š

  9. Beauty penned!πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

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