Bow Down…

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Bow down in obeisance- shoulders drooping, spirits dissipating,

brows tense,

Sense of self meanders like someone searching his way out of a maze,

Pushed against a fence.

Zig Zag, Zig Zag….

Society’s grisly gaze pierces through her making her gag.

Smile– never sardonic but a generous grin,

Be a β€˜good girl’.

Lashing out undeterred is a blasphemy- a sin.

Surrender- you must, your happiness comes last,

A woman is defined by her sacrifices,

Not her sincere intentions or how she has been steadfast.

Pretend- at every step of the way,

It is not terribly taxing to out up a face,

A dainty doll, you must obey.

Reminisce– more than you like to admit,

Of times gone by,

The old tape’s black curls turn and rewind, and you sigh.

There standing in a green garbed land is a little girl,

Untarnished, unscathed and unburdened

by the world’s sinister snarl.

Rewind– travel back to the summery sojourn,

When you could be yourself,

And when your journey had just begun.

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29 responses to “Bow Down…”

  1. Beautiful one Meha
    Loved your way of putting across the message πŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thank you Nitika for the kind words πŸ’š

  2. Wow Meha. You had me hooked! I want more…

    1. Thank you Nats πŸ’š means a lot coming from a wonderful poetess like you!

  3. Beautifully crafted!πŸ’šπŸ’š

  4. Beautiful.. And relatable.

    1. Thank you SaiπŸ’š

  5. This is so beautiful and poignant. The yearning is almost tangible. Loved how you have structured the poem. πŸ’š

    1. Thank you Moonmoon. Trying to match up to you and other brilliant poets here πŸ’š

  6. Wow ! Am spellbound by the sheer beauty of your narrative!

    1. Thank you RiankaπŸ’š means a lot

  7. Meha.. take me with you when you make that journey back. Absolutely moved by your portrayal of the rules of a woman’s life.

  8. Thank you Shweta. Means a lotπŸ’š

  9. Ah, but for the world’s sinister snarl! Well crafted and so relatable, Meha.

  10. Superb MehaπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    1. Thank you ParulπŸ’š

  11. Your last words echo loud… Loved it ❀️.

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