Oops! I Did It Again.

You there, with that mop of hair.

You, who used to sing without a care.

You loved the stage and the English language.

Dramas, debates; why, even the English sausage!

The ten year old you, promised yourself,

That you’d travel, explore even the Arctic shelf.

Broke that promise, didn’t you girl!

However, you realised at age 30, that you did love your curls.

And vowed at the top of your voice, to start afresh,

You’d find that singing voice, write stories for hours at a stretch.

A decade down the line,

What have you to say this time!

‘Oops! I did it again.

Promises are like delicate chinaware, such a pain!’

Pic Courtsey: Jelleke Vanooteghem: Unsplash

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34 responses to “Oops! I Did It Again.”

  1. Absolutely sweet.. The promises we make to ourselves and end up breaking

    1. Thank you Jaya Pillai for reading and liking it:)

  2. So many promises made and broken.

  3. Beautiful poem, Natasha. Rings true for me, too. Such a pleasure reading your poem after such a very long time.πŸ’š

    1. Thanks Moonmoon . I hope we both can snap out of our procrastination and achieve what we wish. Hugs

      1. Amen to that, dear Natasha . Hugs back. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  4. Promises are like delicate China ware indeed ! It’s a lovely and refreshing take on the prompt !

  5. Awesome πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ’šπŸ’š promises that aren’t kept! Happens with so many of us. Loved you poem❀️❀️

  6. Perfect depiction of the promises we keep making and breaking πŸ˜„πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜

  7. Ah the promises we make to ourselves. Such an endearing take NatsπŸ’šπŸ’š

  8. Beauty❀❀❀ so many broken promises… Wish could go back and mend them

  9. Such a beautiful poem! We end up breaking our promises! Beautiful!!!πŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thanks for liking it Pooja Mandla

  10. First of all u did keep the promise to yourself and fought all inertia and wrote. Loved reading your take and remember promises often need to be broken as time changes our priorities. We all are doing our best to be the best version of us. You and your honest confessions are endearing πŸ’š

    1. Thank you Aradhna. You truly know me so well.
      Hugs.

  11. Sweet verse
    Promises are made to be broken

  12. Ahhh something from Nats finallyπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š
    Beautiful and sweet… Chinaware oh yes. Delicare darlingsπŸ˜‚
    Words n cover pic excellentπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thanks Sonali Ray darling:)

  13. That was a beautiful poem. Loved it

    1. Thanks Charulata Panigrahi M’am

  14. What life makes of us, a very striking portrayal!

  15. Ah, the pain of making and breaking promises. But there’s an inherent joy in making and fulfilling some new promises, isn’t there?

    1. Thanks for reading my poem, Seema Taneja:)
      You are absolutely right. Working towards making certain promises come true feels heavenly.

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