She is a weed
Rich farmers say so
She is not a seed they sow
Why let her grow
It is time to mow
This weed must not grow
Oh let me be she pleads
You are just a weed
You must not grow
Time for us to mow
– Pradnya Surve
Just a weed
Comments
11 responses to “Just a weed”
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A very very deep message. Simple and yet powerful!
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Thank you Jaya Ma’am. Your comments are encouraging and helpful
I wrote this after a poignant,agonising news report
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Hard hitting analogy. Simple yet profound.
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Sai ,as always giving honest feedback but certainly motivating for me
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Strong words and the depth 👌
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Sonali,Thank you for appreciating. Your activity on Artoonsinn Poetry Parlour is inspiring. I have begun to take more interest in writing poems
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This is so inspiring !!
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Weed. What a metaphor.
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What attitude society has for girls.Deep.
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Satire.
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A much needed message to society. Well penned.
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