That's How it Had to End

Thank you, sweetheart, I whisper my gratitude

My lips close to your ears

As you lay in a scarlet pool

Withering and twisting

Like a wayward leaf on an autumn noon

.

It’s okay, I tell you

Pushing the knife deeper

Into the guts that dared to annoy me

While you gasp for breath

Hands clawing at my arm in vain

.

Rest in peace, I murmur

When your body lies still as a statue

Your eyes staring at me;

Is it wonder, fear, or hate?

Too late to say now, isn’t it?

But that’s alright, sweetie

Time had come for you to leave  

And my duty was to see you go

.

Now, honey, my heart feels light

My mind is free as sleep beckons me.

Back home I lay on the bed

Drifting to sleep like an innocent child

If only you could haunt me

But that ain’t gonna happen, darling

Sorry… but nope… not sorry

.

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Note: This is a fictional piece. 

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18 responses to “That's How it Had to End”

  1. Such a unique take on the prompt, Srivalli. 💚 Admire the tone of the poem, and the narrative style.

    1. Thank you so much, Moon girl 🙂

  2. Whoa!! What a poem, marvelous!

    1. Thank you so much, Chandra. 🙂

  3. Gulp. Srivalli. You got me, girl. This poem is quintessentially you. Love it

    1. Thank you so much, Natty. 🙂
      Feels good to get back to writing poems again, so the inner me is coming out.

  4. Horror thriller chills running down the spine… story line👌👌👌

  5. Thank you so much, Fatema 🙂

  6. Wow! That was a thriller. Loved it💚

  7. Wow! A story wrapped in a poem! 💚 good one Srivalli.

    1. Thank you, Anuradha. 🙂

  8. Hey that’s really good… Loved the thrill chill… Simply. Superb

  9. a morbid yet powerfol piece👍👍

  10. Here too Sri, took my breath away.

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