As the sun smiles

I see a new dawn 

A lush green lawn

A path lined with blooms .

As the light shifts at noon

The path winds

Along shrubs of thorn

As I rush forward

My body feels alone.

A trying time

Like  a whiplash 

Flicking my mind

Though a chosen chalk path

I feel I never longed for.

As the road zigzags

All that I ask for

 Is a peaceful destination 

With loving souls around

A soft voice tells me

I can, I will.

– Pradnya Surve

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9 responses to “Zigzag life”

  1. loved the positive notes towards the end and the imagery created in the poem.

  2. Such a lovely analogy.

  3. Beautiful imagery, ma’am. Loved the cyclical pattern you’ve portrayed here.💚💚💚

    1. Thank you Moonmoon
      Thanks for tagging

  4. Beautiful imagery 💚💚

  5. A, lovely poem of hope!

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