Moonmoon Chowdhury
Ancient travellers from a distant land,
Pilgrims in the temporary, telluric home,
Atoms of chaste empyrean love,
Bound to each other by a sacred thread.
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Race, class, status, anomalies inapt,
Divine light, the true creed of the soul,
Cherishing each guest, duty paramount,
In line with the decree of the Lord.
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“Atoms of chaste empyrean love” loved the lie. Truly remarkable verses.💚
Thanks so much, dear Gowri. 💚
it’s sublime. I keep marvelling on your choice of words!
Thanks so much, dear Amrita. Credit goes to the dictionary, of course.😄 💚
You are so, so good, Moonmoon .I marvel at the vocabulary and poem.
Thank you for the encouragement, dear Natasha. 💚The credit for the words goes to the dictionary. 😄😄The hallmark of a true amateur 😄
Wow…this is beautiful Moonmoon. Your vocabulary leaves me spellbound.
Thanks so much for the kind words, dear Sheetal. 💚 I attribute the vocabulary to the crutch of dictionary. 😄😄
Choice of words! 👌👌👌Awesome poem, dear💚💚
Thanks so much, dear Pooja. So grateful to each of you for the kind encouragement. 💚💚
Beautifully worded poem.
Thank you so much,ma’am. 💚
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Stupendous 💚💚💚
You are very kind, my dear. Thanks a lot, dear friend💚💚💚
Deep and meaningful