Here is my entry for PoAttic5
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Behold, a wallflower half hidden by stone,
But not without sharp prickly thorns.
That sometimes make negligent passerbys
Stop and look at what nature adorns,
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Look ! A twilight of blushing shades of red,
Awaiting dark night full of shining stars.
A nimble mountain river falling from the cliff,
Or an unhurried stream with a languid skiff,
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Watch !A rebel trying hard to change ,
A stubborn crowd ,a surging mob,
A helpless coward watching with disdain,
Barbaric acts of violence causing bane,
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Discern ! An amalgam of emotions wild,
A drop of nectar with tears of pain,
Though hurt it is a thousand times,
Still loves with passion,a silly heart arcane.
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View! A broken hut in desolate valley,
With flowery creepers overgrown,rife,
Having the best and the worst imaginable,
Playing with jest the game called life.
Beautiful poem 💚 Mam
Vivid comparisons drawn!
Thanks Nitika for liking
Intense and beautiful
Thanks Waqas Gul
Beautiful metaphors!
Thanks Sai
Wow..Such a profound, metaphorical poem..💚💚
Thanks Debashree for the appreciation
such a deep and beautiful poem, ma’am.
Thanks Moonmoon for reading and liking
Beautiful, profound, metaphorical expression
Thanks Pradnya
I love your poetry mam. Its so beautiful, every word so apt and so much soul ❤
Thanks Rianka for appreciation
Love the way each line begins!
Thanks Jaya
Life is beautiful and so is your interpretation of it.Lovely metaphorical poem.
Thanks Indrani for liking my poem.
You have captured the nuances of life beautifully; loved the opening lines of each verse.
Thanks Mumtaz for reading and liking
Beautiful
Thanks Sonali.
Beautiful comparisons
#rulfy
Thanks Gowri
Beautiful metaphors💚💚
Thanks Pooja
Very metaphorical and beautifully said
Thanks Natasha
Beautiful mam!
Thanks Meha
So beautifully penned, ma’am!
Thanks Seema for appreciation
Thanks Seema