Whisper My Name Just Once…

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A day, I thought

perhaps would suffice

Iโ€™d rewind the hands of

Quietly fleeting time.

But can a day ever suffice

The love exchanged in a lifetime?

***

Alas! Too soon have you left

With a searing pain my heart is cleft.

One half goes with you

As I bid my last adieu.

With the other numbed half

What shall I ever do?

***

No whispers leave

Your silent lips.

Instead I imagine words,

Your voice trailing me

โ€œSoft, tarry wait awhile.โ€

Words once uttered  tenderly.

***
Now, instead of my arms

A white shroud hugs

Swathing together both of us.

White colours my void existence

Fill this void, by whispering

My name just once.

***

Or promise me a rendezvous

Visit me in the darkest nights

When my doomed soul strives

Touch me till I burst into a million stars.

Then, like gusts of winds let your arms

Cradle me into serene somnolence.

*****
Mumtaz N K

18-11-2020

Picture courtesy: Unsplash: Priscilla du Preez

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28 responses to “Whisper My Name Just Once…”

  1. so poignant, so delicate, so beautifully written. Loved it sooo much.
    Really loved this line,’Touch me till I burst into a million stars’.

  2. My friend lost her spouse and I saw the deep pain . Thank you Moonmoon Chowdhury.

  3. Very poignant. Beautifully written.

  4. Thank you Gowri Bhargav

  5. Wow ! You mesmerise me everytime ๐Ÿ™‚ I was waiting for your piece so eagerly. Its so so beautiful!

  6. Wow.. This is beautiful and poignant. Loved it!

  7. Thank you Jaya and Riankaโค๏ธโค๏ธ, guess I was battling with a writer’s block. I’ve written a couple of piecs for entry each time I kept on working and re working.

  8. Poignant! It’s been four years since I lost my dad. I can feel the pain in your poem. I know how it feels to lose someone very close to you! Beautifully written, dear Mumtaz๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  9. How beautiful! Your words pierce right through the heart ๐Ÿ’

  10. Poignant… Wonderful words…

  11. Thank you ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–Pooja,Nitika, Sai and Kirti.

  12. What a delicate verse! Perfect words and soulful expressions๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

    1. ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ˜Thank you Sonali

  13. Beautifully penned dear, just at awe on your writeup.

  14. Beautiful lines,๐Ÿ’š with so much to feel. The ending couplet.. “Then, like gusts of winds let your arms

    Cradle me into serene somnolence.” shook me from within

    1. Thank you so very much Reshma, Sarita & Debashree. ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  15. This is just so beautifully written

  16. So evocative, such delicate expressions! Loved it.

    1. Thank you Seema & Waqas.

  17. Poignant and beautifully written

    1. Thank you Natasha.โค๏ธ

  18. Amazing. Love the emotion in your words.

  19. Just awesome!, “Other numbed half ” ๐Ÿ’š

  20. Thank you Great. S Upase and Anuradha Sayeenathan

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