At zenith, the bright sun shines,
Heavenly orbs spinning around the glory
Of the sun; day’s glinting hues a mere reflection.
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In the water, espying its reflection
The radiant moon shines,
Billowing tides hail its glory.
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Reign fugacious of the glory
Surreal illusory reflection,
Sun and moon eclipse; overcast shrouding shines.
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Shines glory forever a mirage of vain reflection.
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Tritina form
It is a ten-line poem composed of three tercets and a final line. The technique used is lexical repetition rather than riming. The end words of the first tercet are repeated in a specific order for the next two tercets and all three words appear in the last line.
Poem and the form – both are excellent.
Thank you
Nicely crafted poem
Thank you Mam
Nicely structured poem
Fantastic Roodaba💚💚💚
Terrific poem and form.
Thank you
The last line is sooo powerful. Beautiful poetry and form, Roodaba. Thanks for explaining it. Will try sometime. <3
Beautiful poem! And thank you for explaining the form💚
Nice..