Sarita Khullar
#AZatPP
#Day22
#LetterU
Unshed tears
Like ominous clouds
Hover on minds sky,
Threatening
To burst anytime.
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Unshed tears
Like molten lava
Smouldering in the bosom,
Ready to erupt,
In devastating volcano
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Unshed tears
Not just dew drops
Like torrents and rapids,
Merging every land
A River in spate
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Don’t touch the wounds,
Play with sentiments raw,
These gossamer feelings ,
A maze they can build,
Incarcerating the soul.
Beautifully written, ma’am. 💚💚💚Love the last stanza.
Thanks Moonmoon
Beautiful mam… The last stanza just too good
Thanks Kirti
Beautifully woven poem. Touching one, Sarita M’am
Thanks Natasha for your comment.
Truly the unshed tears.. have a story to say.. beautiful
Thanks Fatema for liking
Last stanza too good.
Thanks Charulata for liking
So touching and also beautifully crafted💚
Thanks Pooja
Lovely!
Thanks Jaya
That was so beautiful.. unshed tears… loved each and every line of it.
Thanks Shristee for liking the poem.
Each line in the poem is poignant. Beautifully written.
Thanks Mumtaz for your nice comment.
So beautiful..loved every line
Thanks Amrita
So so beautiful. I loved the last stanza💚💚
Thanks Sonali