The Gap

I was drowning,

almost sure to cross the gap

between life and death,

An angelic soul pulled me

I screeched,

I want happiness, can you get it for me?”

“I can get it from inside you”, the old voice still reverberates 

It had compelled me to pull myself out!

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Image credit: Andrew Bui (Unsplash)

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11 responses to “The Gap”

  1. True! It’s us and only us who can make the difference. πŸ’šπŸ’š
    Lovely. Listen to the call of the soulπŸ’š

  2. Thanks Sonali πŸ’šπŸ’š

  3. Your minimalistic words convey a great message. Awesome!πŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thanks a lot Geeta πŸ’šπŸ’š

  4. It is just like the musk deer who doesn’t know what is hidden within and wanders in search of the fragrance

    1. Wow Pradnya
      What a beautiful meaning you brought out of my writing! I feel delighted.

  5. This is profound- a truth of life.

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