The declining years,dominated by sulky bone
When she endured herself as a crone
Yearned for gossips,giggles and grin
Chitter chatter and companion conversation about who would win
Asking her a recipe was a justification
To talk,to connect,to bridge the gap formation
To include her in part of my existence
Feasibly to make her feel of importance
Also the legacies of special dishes needs to be advanced
But as her aridness glanced
Felt walks to topiary an overload tread
Trepidation of being confined to bed
Constantly triggered her fears,made her dread
Years earlier, when she fulfilled all the expectations
Some unrealistic and some burdensome
Solitary cookers applauded “fab its awesome ”
In geezerhood,looking to enrich the essence of her wholesome
The lodging would exchange with paradise to get perfect bliss
Aha ! A quantum leap for her
As dejected disheartened thoughts blur
Substance inside gets privilege to stir
Fabricated and decorated, a life she created cheered
Confidence shouldered ,connections with dearest antiques reappeared
Shared bygone roller coaster,narrated the nostalgia
Dance drank drove and wrote puns
Stopped to care about the judgemental ones
Was a lead for innumerable to thrive
Age is not a padlock to strife
She was a powerful survivor
charismatic alleys of life
Ketki Jalan
This is so lovely, Ketki Jalan. The journey of a woman. So touching and beautifully penned. The ending is just how I would end my poem. Strong one!
Natasha thank you so much.I am blessed to have a wonderful friend like you.
How does a hard working person feel at old age when most of her faculties lay useless.
Realistic and sad ,beautifully worded.
Maam,I meet so many women who describe there lives sadly.I wish the mindset change and happens as I have penned.
Thank you so much maam
Beautifully described a woman’s life journey
I loved the way you ended the poem
Thank you so much dear.
This so amazing ketki.💚💚💚
Well written girl
That is such a well written poem Ketki! Amazing!
Thank you so much Nitika
Good one… The beautiful journey of a woman!
Thank you so much maam