it was an October noon
the sun was glowing bright
tranquil breeze whizzed
frizzy dry leaves that had
tumbled down, rustled,
perhaps whispering about me;
the cloudless sky shined
not a touch of a creamy dollop,
the old rustic waiting room
unoccupied,
I sat under its thatched roof
the cobbled path ahead
stared back,
a few dandelions lay scattered
time was running out
the train would reach this
vacant station anytime
with bated breath
I was waiting for him…
——-
my rucksack lay near my feet
the frills of my gown managed to
grab the dirt
I touched my messy braid, soiled it was,
even my dress was coated with mud
ah! Spoilsport breeze
I heard the distant church bells ringing
suddenly I realised the horizon’s bleeding
I peeked inside the cloakroom
the clock’s arms conveyed, evening
the cowboy in the distance helped
his herd cross the rails,
clickety-clack sang the tracks and,
coal-steam filled the autumn gust
the train thundered into
the vacant station
pulsating, I scoured every nook
every corner
No trace of him, nor his suitcase
heartbroken, I crouched
on the wooden bench,
the train whistled away
leaving smoke trails behind
my heart was
still waiting for him…
—-
the harvest moon shimmered
the nightingales piped a mellifluous tune
the damp breeze pricked my bare skin
a cat slithered underneath the seat
the caretaker lighted the tiny lantern
and nodded, glancing at me
I stood up, my long silhouette
crawled on the cobbled path
the guard gestured, again
night descended in the shanty
but a storm brewed within me
I returned tired,
exhausted, idling the whole day
I looked back at the tiny, empty station
the lantern flames flickered;
perhaps, my heart was still…
waiting for him!💚
I want to know more about this girl and the man… Reads almost like a ballad. Why dont you write a full length story on this?
JP 🤗🥰🥰🥰
Not a story though. I make many mistakes but a sequel is in my mind😃
Let’s see💚
A soulful tale told through beautiful poetry. And the imagery of that forlorn station is 👌. Write a sequel for this. 😋💚
Thanks @sanjukta💚💚🥰
Yes, definitely I have a sequel in my mind. 🤗
What imagery! Just beautiful!💚
@poojamandla thank you so much sweetie🥰
SO atmospheric! Very gripping narrative poem. Loved it.
Thank you Moonmoon💚
Woww Sonali! What imagery you weaved! I loved it so much. Such a beautiful tale you narrated so poetically 🙂
Thank you @nitika💚💚💚