Only for Some Opium I Wish….

If I could have a pinch

I’d surrender without a cringe

Surrender my hopes,

(That seem now the bleakest light,

In darkness, there seems no respite,)

That have dashed my wishes.

****

To sniff a pinch of opium,now I cringe

I beg that I be led into an oblivion!

No more, recognise those wounds 

That have sore bled 

Before turning into abscess

Beyond any cure.

***

A opiumed-tongue is far better

Than harsh words that ring

And pain when tongue like whiplash sings

Your callous words rang 

And have echoed

 In my breast ever since,

Until my fuzzy ears 

Were struck with tinnitus. 

******

© Mumtaz N Khorakiwala

21-1-2021

Picture courtesy: Olga Drach

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9 responses to “Only for Some Opium I Wish….”

  1. Such a poignant poem, Mumtaz. ‘…tongue like whiplash sings’ is such a powerful expression.

  2. ❤️thank you, what better than for the pained heart to become creative according to many masters!

  3. Very poignant and beautiful 💚

  4. Poignantly beautiful, dear!💚💚

  5. Oh, what an attempt to get rid of deep hurts!

  6. Beautiful poem Mumtaz

  7. Heart-wrenching and devastatingly beautiful

  8. Beautiful beautiful💚💚
    Intoxicating😍

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