Can you hear me?
I’m hung between the sky and earth
Can’t go up or come down,
Unable to touch both.
.
I’m lonely here, filled with pain.
Malleable is the voice of mine-
Dissolving in the air, nothing to gain.
The cry from my heart, fails to reach Him.
.
My faith is slowly fading
And I doubt His existence.
I can see many howling
Holding their loved ones.
.
There is my beloved
Why is she full of tear?
With such a gloomy face
Somebody, she’s bending over.
Washing away her last hope
Crying there is she.
I see the body in the stretcher
Oh God! he looks just like me!!!”
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Ah! Different take. Good one @minati
Thanks sonali.
The end was so unexpected! Nice poem 😊💚
Thank you
Nice
Thank you
Nice poem
Thank you ma’am
Nice one
Great poem from a unique POV .
Novel interpretation. Good one!
Novel one💚