Hot-air Balloon

Let’s get into the groove

Fly high in a hot air balloon

that flies only in the vast sky

and if the balloon’s rope gets untied

from the ground

You’d be left alone in the air

with few unknown men

and now you all, tackle together

an unforeseen circumstance

just like you would’ve tackled

with ones you’ve always known!

.

What would you all do?

in the air that’s unharming

yet that doesn’t guarantee a living

even when it’s giving 

the inevitable element – Oxygen

that you breathe

that keeps you alive!

.

What would you all do?

to come out of this

unforeseen circumstance

when different minds think unlike

where few will talk and others shout

and amidst all this lovely mess

there’ll be a time

when one or all of you will suggest

Stay calm, let’s think please 

and then slowly, the ways of

coming out of this open air

will be unleashed!

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16 responses to “Hot-air Balloon”

  1. Wowww! Such a profound poem. Loved it. 💚

  2. Omg! My knuckles shivvvverrrrr😂
    Us, Sky-high…
    Land’s no sign
    Knuckles chuckle
    Hearts tremble
    What a risky ride
    But you’re my by side🤩😍💚
    Lovelyy!

    1. Ya ya!!
      M by your side ☺️☺️💚💚

  3. Now this is a poem that needs to be put to music… Reads just like a, song!

    1. Wow Mam 💚💚
      M delighted, simply delighted reading this ❤️💚

  4. Beautifully written, Nitika
    Profound one

    1. Thankyou so much Pradnya 💚💚

  5. I have nevvery been in a hot air balloon. If I do this poem will definitely flash across my mind. Very good Nikita

    1. Thanks a lot Gowri 🙂 Delighted that you read and liked!

  6. Honestly your poem needs a musical groove! Amazing!

    1. Thanks a lot Mumtaz! Wish someone could put this music or should I try 😛

  7. Wow, this is such a Profound piece! Very well written, dear!💚💚

    1. Thanks a lot Pooja 😊💚

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