Moonmoon Chowdhury
The flames of rage spiral and soar
Tainting the terrain with dense fumes
To satiate its scorching core
It burns down structures numerous
Settling a lofty victory score.
Exhausted with the taxing drill
It craves a truce, fatigued and sore
Its dying embers, fenced by tombs
Parched and defeated evermore.
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About the poetry form – I have tried to experiment with the Magic9 poetry form which loosely follows the rhyme scheme of the magic word, ABRACADABRA, barring the R’s. So the rhyme scheme it follows is, ABACADABA. It consists nine lines and has no set rules for line length or theme.
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Wow!ovy. Thanks for letting us know the new style. Will try this 💚😂
Thank you, dear Sonali. 💚💚 Would love to read yours. 💚
Informative… thank you moonmoon
Abracadabra
Thank you, dear Fatema. 💚💚💚
Oh, wow! Awesome poem! Thank you for letting us know the new form💚💚
Thank you, dear Pooja. 💚💚💚 would love to read your Magic 9.
Nice dear.. 💚💚
Love it Moonmoon. The form and the poem. ‘It’s dying embers fenced by tombs’. Poignant. Hard hitting.
Thank you so much dear Natasha for your warm appreciation. So happy that you liked it. 💚💚💚
Thank you, dear Kirti 💚💚💚
Appears like jungle fire
Nice one
Thank you, dear ma’am. 💚💚💚
Lovely to read Moonmoondi. Evocative imagery. I can never write in a particular form!
Thank you so much, dear Amrita. 💚💚💚 your poems are beautiful.
Moonmoon I too have written a 9 line poem this evening.
Such a lovely co-incidence, ma’am 💚💚💚
You have very beautifully used the magic9 form.
Thank you for the encouragement, dear Indrani 💚💚💚
Thanks for the info.. Lovely poem
Thank you so much, dear ma’am.💚💚💚
Thank you for the info, Moonmoon Chowdhury. Very hard hitting lines, a very remarkable and realistic description of fury.
Thank you so much, dear Mumtaz💚💚💚
Lovely poem and style 💚
Thanks so much, dear Gowri <3 <3 <3
Beautiful. And that poetry style…:)
Thank you so much, dear Sheetal💚💚💚