Sheetal Ashpalia
One day, it’s gold,
On others, it’s grey,
The sky is like that,
A colorful display.
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One day, it’s gold,
On others, it’s grey,
Happiness is,
A beautiful ray.
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One day, it’s gold,
On others, it’s grey,
Just like the sand,
A contrast at play.
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One day, it’s gold,
On others, it’s grey,
Love’s emotions,
Both ways, they sway.
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One day, it’s gold,
On others, it’s grey,
Life’s journey,
Wonders strewn every way.
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loved the sing-song tone of the poem!
Lyrical and beautiful!
Thank you so much Jaya ma’am!
Thank you Shristee
Beautiful. Almost like a chant that repetition is.
Thanks a lot Shweta
Loved it! 💚💚
Thank you Pooja
The repetition has a great effect
Thank you Gowri
Beautifully positive, loved it. Loved the refrain. 💚
I stand corrected… repetition, not refrain 😀💚
Thanks a lot dear Moonmoon
Beautiful poem.Is it a particular style ?
Thanks Ketki. Just followed Repetition that’s all
Beautiful! The repetition sounded great 🙂
Thanks a lot Nitika
Lyrical and beautiful
Thank you my dear
Beautiful and true
Thank you Ma’am
So true and beautiful💚💚
Thanks a lot Sonali
Beautiful.. Loved the repetition 💚
Lovely format..its lyrical