Moonmoon Chowdhury
‘Forever’ twirled and landed,
On the soft sands of her tender mind,
Transporting her into a perfect realm,
Its promise, she held close to her heart.
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She signed ‘forever’ on friendships,
Watered them with smiles and true words,
Branded the patches with unique seals,
Securing them against weather’s rough hands.
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She wrote odes to eternal bonds,
And envisioned the happy ‘ever after’,
She BELIEVED, undeterred by derision,
Humming the sacred hymn in her heart.
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Time reshaped things and people,
Tearing down the revered, known haven,
She lamented the loss but surrendered,
Returning ‘forever’ to the abode of pages.
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Superb ya!!!. Your poems are always unique.💗💗
Thank you so much, dear friend. I love your poetry and look forward to reading your take, today. <3 <3
Wow… Beautiful Moonmoon
Thank you so much, Kirti. <3
Wow this is so beautiful Moonmoon! What a contrasting ending!
Thank you so much, Nitika. <3
The beginning in stark contrast to the ending. Learning a lot from you, Moonmoon dear.😍
That’s how the story ended for her, sadly. Thank you, dear friend. I admire the spontaneity and humour in your poetry…your inimitable style. <3
So touching! But is it adhering to the prompt? Or have I not understood the prompt correctly? Isn’t it meant to start with a thank you and end in sorry?
Thank you, Chandra. <3 I have followed my own prompts for the first two days. <3
Lovely 💚 you are a beauty inside out💚💚 and so are your thoughts!
Thank you, dear Shweta for the kind words. I feel the same about you. <3 <3 <3
Beautiful
Thank you so much, Fatema. <3
Superb! Just loved it Moonmoon. It kept me hooked till last word.
Thank you for the kind words, dear Vandana. So glad you liked it. <3
And how ‘forever’ is fictionalized… Beautiful di❤️
Thank you so much, dear Abinaya. <3 <3
Beautiful poem
Thank you so much, Ramya. <3
Love how you gradually took us down the contrasting lane towards the end.
Thank you so. much, dear Srivalli. <3
Wow 💚
Thank you, Patricia. <3
So beautifully penned! 💚
Thank you so much, dear Gowri. <3 <3
Unique and interestingly narrated. Moonmoon Chowdhury the striking contrast between the beginning and the ending takes one’s breathe away. Write on, let’s hear some amazingly inked poetry.
Thanks so much for the kind review, dear Mumtaz. So grateful for the encouragement. <3
Beautifully written
Thanks so much, dear Sai. <3
I don’t have words💚💚💚
Thank you, dear Sonali. <3 <3 <3 <3
Forever beautiful
Thank you, ma’am. <3
Amazing 💚💚💚
Thank you, dear Esha . <3 <3 <3 <3
Loved this one.
Thank you, Madhu <3
Beautiful, Moonmoon!
Forever actually means until death of the concerned person, because there’s nothing that is truly forever.
Thank you, Minati💚
Beautiful as always.
Thank you for the kind words, ma’am. <3 <3 <3