Sonali Ray
the blues suddenly turn black
the superimposed cliffs in the distance shudder
the playful breeze halt itself trying to comprehend
colourful flocks scurry home,
frightened at the untimely darkness
and the Gold is gradually cloaking
the Orange king is no more glowing,
clouds of hatred, jealousy, bitterness
overshadow its brightness, gifting the earth an ephemeral gloom
But the lustre of the Gold can never be buried, it’ll shine through obstacles
and so the Golden orb smiles again, now as a Diamond Ring
killing its demons of spite, envy, resentment
eclipsed but hopeful, the fireball gleams with pride
real strength lies in overcoming the obstacles with courage and determination.💚
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Sonali, words flow so easily from your pen
Thank you ma’am.💚
👌👌💚💚
Thanks Nitika😍💚
and the Gold is gradually cloaking
the Orange king is no more glowing….this is fantabulous imagery
But the lustre of the Gold can never be buried, it’ll shine through obstacles
and so the Golden orb smiles again, now as a Diamond Ring
killing its demons of spite, envy, resentment
eclipsed but hopeful, the fireball gleams with pride…..this is so hopeful.
Very well you have penned the eclipse with never dying hope. Beautiful inspirational poetry. Admirations.
Thank you so much dear Varsha💚
Thats an exquisite piece of writing Sonali
Thanks a lot Waqas.
Wow 💚
Soulful..👌👌
Thank you ao muchh Sudha💚😍
As always.
. The images you ceeate are superb
JP💚💚😍
A wonderful poem on eclipse. You are awesome dear
Thank you so much Gowri💚
Just phenomenal just love the way ur words flow with ease.
Aww! Thanks a lot Reshma
Smooth flowing beautiful images
Thanks a lot ma’am.💚
Beautiful Poem.
Thank you moonmoon💚
Eclipsed-> darkness to brightness painted very well with your colorful words.. Keep take us in your colorful journey..😀
Thank you Bro😝💚