Abinaya
“Thank you”
The words hung heavily in the air
The wind is filled with wordless wishes
Conversation is scarce
Your gratitude tore me apart
We stood in a moment of pain
Sheathed in the colours of sunset
I wished that I could bear your
Tears in my eyes and
Carry your misery in my heart
But you had to leave here and now
I wanted to say something
Something simple and foolish
Like wanting this love a little longer
Maybe for a lifetime too
Though time is fleeting, shy and modest
I wanted to share it with you.
Perhaps this was nothing
But a beautiful delusion or dream
And I didn’t want to taint it
With the reality that was far too unkind
By opening my mourning eyes
And looking at
Your precious gem-like face
Now as fragile as glass, guilt lingering;
Remorse scarring its serenity.
This moment felt like a forged memory
And you seemed like a known stranger
As you turned your back toward
Me and left with a feeble
“Sorry.”
You weave magic with your words, Abinaya. Loving your poems.
This expression is so unique..’This moment felt like a forged memory’.
You were the first person to read my poem yet again.. di thank you so much this itself means the world to me❤️ and thank you for your kindest reviews ❤️❤️
This is beautiful, Abinaya
Thank you so much 😊
Beautiful ❤️
Thank you 😊
Very touching, Abhinaya. Your words cast a spell.
Thank you so much 😊
Hi five Abinaya. Beautiful one, I wanted to write on similar thoughts! Your poem came as a pleasant surprise to me. Saw river Cauvery today and ended up writing on it.
Oh is it! I hope you liked my take on it. And I’m curious to read about Cauvery too❤️
This is so good💚💚💚
Thank you so much 😊
This is so very good Akka. Loved it ❤
Thank you D❤️
Ahh the pains of heartbreak..wonderfully portrayed
Thank you so much di❤️