Dreams Built On Lies

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A streak of grey across a blue sky

Does not make it grey.

Or so I say.

Huddled amidst a million dreams

Lies  a heart that yearns

And fails again and again.

Can a  little twist

Distort what is?

 A word added here

And another subtracted,

Would barely make a difference.

Or so I tell myself.

Desires have crystallized

Into little sparkling pieces

That glitter in the dark –

Taunting me.

A few  lies here and there

Are all it took :

And yet they gnaw at

The walls of my soul,

Slowly scraping away each layer.

My pillows lie limp

And the nights cave in,

Drowning the songs of celebration.

A streak of grey across a blue sky

Does not make it grey,

I tell myself.

My laughter mocks me, yet again.

A lie can be nothing else.

Image : Unsplash – Bad taste 

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29 responses to “Dreams Built On Lies”

  1. Wonderful, mam πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  2. Wow ma’am πŸ’šπŸ’š

  3. A little lie doesn’t matter or we can lie about or ignore a little grey? Both ways possible.
    Nice one

  4. Such a nice way of putting your thoughts

  5. Lie by any name is a lie indeed.. Beautiful

  6. Last lineπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ’š

  7. how wonderfully introspective! Love it!

  8. Thanks so much… Means a loy πŸ’š

  9. Wow, so beautiful!πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ‘

  10. Queen of pun
    Awesome game changer
    Up above the world do high
    Lies the very lie I carve.

    Nothing can make me surrender
    I’m born to be a free lender
    Pacing over the Pacific, through the clouds
    Only to mark my territory precise.

    Just laying the foundation
    I often dreamt for ages
    To see the scintillating stars
    With bare eyes of hope, I conspice.

    Beautiful poetry on lie. Awesome punning ma’am. Admirations.

  11. You and your words, mesmerizing. And I’m not lying πŸ˜ƒ
    Lovely JPπŸ’šπŸ’š

  12. Thanks so much for all your application πŸ’š

  13. Thanks a lot Varsha πŸ’š

  14. This is so poignant. Loved the title and the tone of the poem. Such a beautiful creation, ma’am. πŸ’š

  15. Thanks so much Moonmoon πŸ’š

  16. Too good, can’t appreciate enough πŸ™‚

  17. Thank you so much Nitika πŸ’š

  18. Simply amazing Jaya! The heart loves to make believe… loved your opening lines!

  19. Thanks so much Mumtaz πŸ’š

  20. Nice way to depict what the heart says . A nice way to write a poem too . I loved it . 😊🌟

  21. Thanks so much Radhika!

  22. A streak of grey across a blue sky, does not make it grey.

    How wonderful!!! Very nice poem

  23. A very well crafted poem mam. And the yearnings of the heart has been beautifully expressed.

  24. Thank you so much Gowri and Indrani πŸ’š

  25. So poignant. Loved the last two lines.

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