Pradnya Surve
Darkness at the begining
Darkness at the end
His mind rewinds
As he slips through the dark tunnel
Disowned by sinners
Possessed by offenders
Journey of a creation
From dump to waste
Maimed for wretched look
At traffic signals and every nook
Palms spread and pleads made
Dawn to dusk for a crust of bread
As age proceeds
An upgradation in deeds
Purloin made expertise
His life no ease
Plunged down a down a dark tunnel
Darkness at the beginning
Darkness at the end
_ Pradnya Surve
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Nice of Pradnya 💚 Liked how you started and ended this piece
I have come across many people whose life was wasted because of their circumstances
Thank you Nitika, Sonali fir reading and appreciating
Good one 👍
Very beautiful lines depicting truth
Thank you Waqas Gul for reading my poem. It is very heart wrenching to see young children thrown away and left to their fate.
Harsh reality of a callous society
Thank you Sarita Ma’am for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts
This harsh reality hurts but a long way to go to change this
Truly a victim of circumstances!
Many things have to changed to change these circumstances
Thank you Jaya Ma’am for reading and expressing your view
This was so poignant and deep. Well written 👏
It is heartbreaking to see abandoned and street children, young lives wasted
Truly tragic.
Thank you Sai for reading
I feel for these children when I see so many of them on the streets
Heartbreaking poem, ma’am. Beautifully written.
Thank you Moonmoon for reading and sharing your thoughts
This subject is very close to my heart
Poignant … Expressed beautifully
Thank you Kirti
Came across many such people
Beautiful expressions, ma’am!
Thank you Pooja
It is very saddening to see abandoned children being forced into begging and criminal activities
Wow amazing! ❤️
Thank you Mumtaz
The issue of destitute children is a heart wrenching one. So many lives wasted
Slaves of circumstances. Beautiful 💚💚
Mega, Thank you for reading
It hurts to know that a beautiful life is dumped
//Darkness at the beginning
Darkness at the end//
This tugged at my heart!
Seems,Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts
It is indeed heart wrenching to see the young children wandering