Baby steps, one at a time, she tries to take
Wobbling, shaking, and trying not to stumble
A hand stretched in the front, searching for support
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I extend my arm, wriggling the fingers in encouragement
She grins, a toothless smile fixed on her cute face
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Her knife gleams in the dark before slicing through my wrist
Beautiful poem Srivalli
Thank you, Ketki. 🙂
Reminds me of creepy movies.. but you really put up well
Haha… Thank you, girl. 🙂
Whoa! Yet another wonderful piece from the queen of horror.
Thank you so much, Seemaji. 😀
OMG! Hadn’t expected the end!
Thank you, Vandana. 🙂
Cute one Srivalli.
Ah! I missed the last line, This is Srivalli and yes we should be prepared to be surprised. Very nice take.
Thank you, Anuradha. I did wonder how you found it cute. ;P
Wow!! Did not expect that last line! Awesome
Thank you, JP. 🙂
Brr! That last line. So good, Srivalli
Thank you, Nat. 🙂
Twist in the end .macabre !
Thank you, mam. 🙂
Such a marvelous twist. Loved it
Thank you, Gowri. 🙂
The last line gave me the shivers. What a twist. 💚
Thank you, dear girl. 🙂
Great poem Sri
Thank you, Indrani. 🙂
Whoa, too stunning an end. I wonder at the stilted fate of the protagonist.
Thank you, Mumtaz. 🙂
Poetry, as sharp as a knife!
Thank you, Minati. 🙂
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