Is she an enchantress from heaven?
I fell for her not once but a thousand times…..
Entranced by the alluring beauty,
I travel to the realms of paradise.
.
I pen my ardent emotions as an epistle to her in my diary….
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My love,
.
Thy radiant face gleams
like several full moons in the sky,
And I am completely soaked
In that ethereal glow.
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Thy long cascading tresses
bounce with the passing zephyr.
I envy those fragrant jasmines
that adorn thy hair like bejeweled stars in a dusky sky.
.
The yards of luscious silk
draped around thy sinuous curves,
Like a dancer’s feet
pirouettes around thy gentle skin with orchestrated finesse.
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The soft words thou utter,
Are a musical ode to my ears.
They bloom a garden of wildflowers
deep within my swaying heart.
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I yearn for thee,
Like the undulating waves of the ocean.
With my soulful song
I seek for a place in thy heart.
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I am a commoner and thee, a ravishing woman from the celestial sky,
I can’t offer riches nor promise thee a kingdom
But I shalt offer thee my only throbbing heart, my solemn soul
And a lifetime of passionate love…
.
Love doth drive me crazy however…
However….
I don’t wish to cage thee with my love.
Rather, I shalt ardently wait hoping you would comprehend my love,
Until one day you choose to willingly bond with me for eternity
.
– An Ardent Lover
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Picture Credit : David Brooke Martin ( Unsplash)
Beautiful
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Nice one..
Thankyou Ma’am
Beautiful
Thankyou Ma’am
Your epistle captures the urgency of a love-lorn man. Loved the touch of sensuality and hint of eroticism.
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Last line… beautiful 💚💚💚
Thankyou Fatema💚
Beautiful, dear 💚 💚
Thankyou Pooja💚
This is a powerful one and varied emotions come through. Well written entry for Poattic 6 my dear Gowri
Thankyou Natasha 💚
Well penned
Sensual, emotions expressed well
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Beautiful poem Gowri! I liked the underlying theme where the lover gives time to the beloved to comprehend his love.
Thankyou very much Nitika💚
Beautiful Gowri, I love the metaphors you have used. aayiram nilave vaa.
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Thankyou Anuradha 🙂💚
Sensuous, yearning yet letting thy love free.
Beautifully written
Thankyou Itali💚
Nicely penned poem Gowri.
what a beautiful portrayal of an ardent lover’s love-drenched heart. Brilliant creation, Gowri. <3
Thankyou very much Moonmoon 💚💚
How did I miss it? It’s amazing Gowri💚💚💚