An abandoned house on my way to work,
Everyday I spy its magnificent architecture.
With boundary walls blackened by algae,
Ravaged by the vagaries of sun and rain,
Though still magnificent in every aspect.
I think of the people who lived here,
Children playing in the arched varandah,
This lawn with old mango trees must have,
reverberated with their innocent laughter,
Now strewn with weeds and vines spatter.
Sun rays through the coloured glass panes,
A row of faded red pillars in the veranda,
Bring alive in my mind those lively people,
Sitting on a swing or a woven charapai,
Chopping vegetables for lunch or dinner,
Playing Antakshari in melodious sing song.
Or there might be a game of carrom or ludo,
A lively game of cards amidst accusations,
And cards being thrown by the one who lost.
Followed by loud laughter from the winners.
I haven’t peeped inside but I can think of.
Old mahogany dining table with finest china,
A delicate plate ,cup still lying inside cupboard,
All protected securely by spiders’ gossamer web,
And dusted with nature’s free flowing dust.
I imagine alcoves to keep old statues and,
Nooks for candles, tiny vases and ornaments.
A wooden horse still rocking to and fro,
As though a child has just come down.
Kept in a corner while the children grew.
I have been watching it for years now,
A strong urge to get down the rickshaw,
And explore that mystic house comes & goes,
I am always in a hurry to reach the college
I am always in a hurry to go back home,
Every time this abandoned house haunts my heart,
I think of parents who waited when children were gone.
Beautiful imagery ma’am 💚💚
Thanks Kirti for liking the poem
A house of memories.
Beautiful poem, ma’am. 💚❤️💚
Thanks Moonmoon, always encouraging.
Beautiful imagery, ma’am!💚💚
Thanks Pooja
I imagined myself there! Beautiful imagery, lovely poem
Thanks Natasha, This is an actual experience. Once I had read about old Jews houses of Goa, most of whom had gone out.
Same is the trend in Punjab, people shifting to America and Canada .
Beautiful imagery Sarita Ma’am
Thanks Pradnya
Nice imagery Sarita.
Thanks Charulata
Vivid! A beautifully haunting end.
Thanks Sai
👍👍👍
Thanks Indrani
This is so beautiful ma’am.💚💚
Thanks Sonali
Creates such visual imagery. Wonderfully penned
Thanks Sheetal
Good poem Mam! Reminded me of my own poem – Little House that I’d written sometime back 🙂
Thanks Nitika
Exactly my sentiments when I see old abandoned houses
Thanks Jaya for liking