Abandoned!

I abandoned myself in Quest of Love,

My happiness, My Self, were all squandered and gone..

The Melancholic Heart gave up sporadically,

But the perseverant emotions held on firmly.

Those incessant fights went on ceaselessly,

I kept loosing myself in the spree of his mercy.

My feelings were dependent, my hopes astray,

How will I clinch you to my heart,if I forfeit myself away.

I’ll gently pick up my Soul and heal the oozing pain,

For no longer I am your Slave and will free the abandoned joie de vivre.

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21 responses to “Abandoned!”

  1. Nice one Shweta! Loved the positive ending πŸ™‚

  2. Touched a raw chord indeed.πŸ’š

  3. This is so good..and as they say..all’s well that ends well.. loved the happy ending πŸ’šπŸ’š

  4. Loved the ending.. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  5. I loved your poetry, looking forward to more !

    1. Thanku dear, will try to share soon😊

  6. A poem of pain ,hope and determination.

  7. Poignant and well etchedπŸ’š

  8. Love the optimism in the last two lines.

  9. Beautiful. Positive vibes. πŸ’š

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